The Essay I Just Can't Seem To Fix
If I could rework one piece of writing for my Advanced Writing class, it would definately be my Technological Literacy Autobiography. When I wrote it, it was way too long. I never got it like I wanted it. At the end I just felt like it wasn't any good. It got to the point that I was actually going to sleep at night and having dreams about fixing it. Even now when I think about it I feel frustrated. How can I make my poor paper better?
posted by mariam5 at 10:35 PM
1 Comments:
Maria,
Longer paper can still be good papers, but I understand your point about not getting a paper quite where you want it to be.
What specifically would you want to change? We're you unhappy with your focus, format, voice, etc?
Do you still want to revise this is the new online writing context given on the assignment sheet? Maybe the new "twists" will help the revision process. Looking at your paper in a totally new way is definitely a good way to revamp a paper.
I just hope you don't loose any sleep over it this time. :)
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